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The “F-word” and Five Other Words to Get a Rise Out of Your Online Donors

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By Lon Chapman, Executive Vice President

In online marketing, there is always a new shiny object to grab our attention. And because of this, we are fooled into thinking that the rules of marketing must be equally as dynamic. We want them so badly to be dynamic; the same-old, same-old rules just seem so, well, old-fashioned.

cavepaintingBut marketing is marketing. And the rules really haven’t changed since the stone age of marketing. That’s because though the tools of marketing may evolve, human behavior endures.

The fact is, direct marketing tenets are far more elastic than most of the medium that they govern.

So what motivates people to give to your organization online is not that different from what makes them give over the phone or in the mail – or in direct solicitations.

At the risk of sounding like the “old folks” I derided as being “so yesterday” when I first entered the direct marketing world more than a handful of years ago, this blog topic was first published as a newsletter article I wrote about direct mail marketing in a pre-Google/Twitter/Facebook world.

fb, twitter, google, emailBack then (and still today), everyone was looking for that magic teaser that would make our donors want rip open the envelope to see what was inside, and ultimately give.

The guiding principle was and still is an economy of words – getting your message across in as few words as possible.

When I revisited this topic, I was not really surprised to find that the rules are as applicable today as they were when I first wrote this article. In fact, in some ways they are even more so because these days donors are responding as much to consumerist values as they are to philanthropic motivations when deciding to whom to give.

Simply put, donors are looking for the biggest bang for their buck.

The following six words all are “value” words. They supplement and complement your argument to give. But be warned that by themselves they are NOT a reason to give, they are simply motivational. However, combined with your argument to give, they can be magic. They will tip the decision process on whether to read your email – or open the envelope – in your favor.

FREE Yes, the “F-word”. The impact of this one word to getting response cannot be underscored enough. It is every marketer’s friend, commercial and non-profit alike. Embrace it.

NEW There is something enticing about that which is new. It says to a donor: “This is not the same old stuff you have seen before.”

SIMPLE Process driven aspects of the appeal whether it be filling out a survey or contribution page seem less laborious.

FAST The internet was built on immediate gratification. Plus, everyone says they are way too busy … except when it comes to watching YouTube.

URGENT It’s a toss-up between “urgent” and “important” as to which is more impactful. Regardless, “urgency” is a primal copywriting “hook” for a reason.

YOU This is probably the most important of all the words – even more so than FREE – for its sheer versatility and impact. As marketers we can never forget that our job is to make the connection between the consumer/donor and the product.  Without the “you”, there is no connection.

As important as these words are, there are definitely more. Which do you think are the most important ones?

Grappling With Writer’s... Um ...

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Here are some tips to break out of that writing rut.

By Jim Hussey, President

Whether professional writers generating grant applications, direct-mail copy and annual reports or just authors of everyday memos, all of us have been plagued by writer’s block.

Writer’s block is something that I consistently battle. As a copywriter, the author of frequent memos and proposals, and, in this case, a blog, I constantly find myself facing the mental brick wall that brings the flow of writing to an abrupt halt.

Great authors such as Faulkner, Fitzgerald and Hemingway often turned to alcohol as their remedy. However, drunkenness generally is frowned upon by clients, colleagues, family members and family doctors. As a result, I have attempted to avoid this route.

Instead, I’ve developed other tactics and queried fellow writers about their own strategies. Maybe some of these ideas can help you.

Plow on through

The most common strategy is just to start writing and push through the mental barrier that’s blocking you. In this case, it doesn’t matter what you write, just write it. You can go back and edit later. Chances are you’ll find yourself on a roll within a couple of minutes.

writingI also find it helpful to occasionally walk away from the computer and do it “old school” style by getting a pen and paper and just writing longhand. I often find that while writing on a computer, I edit my work as I go along instead of concentrating on the idea I’m writing about. Writing by hand breaks me out of that habit.

You also don’t have to write in a coherent order. When I'm writing a four-page direct-mail package, I often will skip from the first page to the last page. Or if I hit a wall, I’ll skip away from the letter altogether and begin writing another component, such as the reply form or an informational insert.

Look at the competition

All of us have hundreds of seed packages from other organizations laying around our offices. Grab a handful and start reading. You probably will learn a few new techniques that will open your mind to new possibilities.

Such methods not only will help you break out of writer’s block, but they also will help you expand your arsenal of writing styles.

Avoid distractions

hot coffeeA ringing telephone and the quiet “ding” heralding the arrival of new e-mails often will prevent you from getting into the flow of writing. When I’m under a tight deadline in such situations, I often grab my laptop or a pen and some paper and head out of the office to a local coffee shop to find some peace, quiet and inspiration. A latte and a dose of Muzak can work miracles.

As one of my colleagues told me, “Never underestimate the power of caffeine."

Start again in the morning

My business partner, Greg Adams, refuses to start a project late in the afternoon.
“When you've reached a point of frustration, it’s OK to leave and come back to it the next day,” he adds. “Then, in a moment of relaxation, the idea hits you. Your subconscious keeps gnawing on it until a solution is found.

How have you overcome writers block? I'd love to hear your tricks and techniques!

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